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The serene and secret moments shared between kisses,
Left her sweetly depressed with joy.
All the happy and loving Mr. and misses,
Showed her they were meant to be combined for life.

She felt his heart, for just one moment, beat and melt into her overflowing emotional artery.

He is her soul and she knows his love runs through her veins,
Keeping her alive and human unlike ever before.

Her dreams were once filled with depressing and dark death and hatred for all of the world.
Now the dreams are filled with making a new amazing meaningful life.

Reading out loud these words and lines of cliches,
I know he is my one.

Please tell me what you think

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  • eternal-devotion
    October 4, 2007
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    Unusual

    I found that this is an unusual way in which to describe the love you have found. However it is insightful in the fact that you touch upon the fact that you have been disappointed in the past but found a new beginning. My hopes for you is that you won't be disappointed again. This is wonderful and I enjoyed reading this very much.


  • kill the lights
    October 4, 2007
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    aww,
    it's sweet. =)