i sit and think about the way things were
the way they used to be
the way you used to kiss
the way you used to hold
and mostly the way you looked at me
i can't help but wonder
what went wrong?
what changed so quick and drastically?
i've been waiting for forever
for you to want to be with me again
for you to look at me
kiss and hold me
and just be with me again
i hate sitting and waiting
and all of your secrets
all i can think about
is the way we used to be
i want you to love me
i want you to hold me tight
but in your eyes it seems
i can never do anything right
i try to tell you how i feel
in hopes that you'll change your mind
i love you like nobody else ever will
maybe someday you'll realize
A contest entry
- (*~(~*~(~*~(~*~(~*~(PRE-WRITES OK!!!!....SOMETHING SAD...MAKE ME CRY!....NOTHING GROSS.. NO CUTTING OR MUTILATION POEMS! CAN BE LOVE,SADNESS,LONELY,DEATH,DEATH OF A PET ETC~*~)~*~)~*~)~*~)~*)~*~()~* by xxlisajazminexx.
425 points, ended October 4, 2007, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Love by live in love.
500 points, ended October 9, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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touching
i feel this poem and i know where it commes from i have theses egzact feeling for somone and actually it's kind of scary that somone feelegzactly how i do. not the rythem on parts of this poem seem just a little off at spots but that happens sometimes and could be fixed very easily. this is an amazing poem and i enjoyed it very very much and i thank you with all my heart for entering and wish you the best of luck in this contest, not that you will need it with your talent. lil
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sounds like i'm speaking those words, great write!
but i saw on your page that u have two HM trophies. and i hate to do it, but i have to remove this poem, cause i wanna give people who have no trophies one. but i saw that you got two in your one day being here on AP, that's very impressive! i'm sure you'll be racking up the trophies in no time. welcome to AP!
and feel free to enter my other contest, maybe this will fit with one of the options.
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wonderfully done.........
i feel your pain ... i really do
nothing so painful than a broken heart....
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thank you so much for entering this wonderful beautiful poem into my contest..........
much much love........
and thank you again!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
Young Love
So rich & beautiful. Sadly never lasting. The years rush by
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