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Welcome Home

Hollow footprints in the sand
leading off to no man's land
I follow them forever it seems
I finally get to where they lead.

Not knowing where I was
I followed those footprints
They brought me here
I see you standing very near.

Holding your arms out
your welcoming me
I am still confused
of where I may be.

Finally I come to understand
I am not in no man's land
"Welcome Home" you say to me
"I saw your pain, and set you free"

I went to sleep and thought I dreamed
of those footprints and where they leed
I followed them and came upon
this beautiful man, with hair so long.

I am home, I made it here
He welcomed me and cried a tear
"Welcome Home" he said again
I smiled at him and said "Amen"



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I just got inspired by the picture of Jesus hugging the man..its beautiful!

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  • Aajdj
    April 5
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    love it


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 21, 2008

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    Ohhh lovel poem I can't wait for that day to be invited into his arms . Thank you for entering this poem into my contest I wish you the best of Luck

  • Michael A
    October 7, 2007

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    very nice

    this shows how vulnerable you are and that you are willing to let readers truly get a glimpse of all of you. this is a pure and honest write, flowing gracefully and the tone is perfect for it throughout. good luck in your contest, regardless this was exceptional.


  • Living-Out-Loud
    October 4, 2007
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    Beautiful. -paint


  • bonjourbunnie
    October 4, 2007
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    A good poem on religion. Good luck in the contest!


  • Eternallycurious
    October 4, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem, I am a christian even if God and I arent really on speaking terms right now... Maybe.. This gives me a little hope that may change soon.


  • Moonlight Complex
    October 4, 2007

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    Although I am not christian I still find this poem very beautiful. You did a wonderful job in making this poem very sweet and happy.


  • Little-Marshmallow
    October 4, 2007

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    Nice loving poem, loved the happy ending Great write my beautiful sister and best of luck in the contests


  • Lady Australis silver member
    October 3, 2007
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    wonderful mum


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 3, 2007

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    beautiful presentation loved this very much! excellent imagery...


  • Melodies
    October 3, 2007

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    Wonderfully presented and penned!

    A tender and loving poem that makes me happy!


  • Angel Of Heaven99
    October 3, 2007
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    Thank you

    I just got this inspiration and went with it. I really like it


  • captain howdy
    October 3, 2007

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    Wow! this IS so beautifully penned and your picture compliments the poem nicely! I love the softness and love in this. *ten clappy guys*

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