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What is past must stay

Flanders fields we left behind
Earthen hearts fallowed
Withered within the soil
White crucifix for every bleed
Erected in the mind
And borne out by imagined need

Yet here we are

No prisoners were taken
No quarter given
We ground each other
To abrasive diminution
Only words left forsaken
Silence as ammunition

Yet here we are

We have skin again
Let it not be tested
We feel our fragility
Truthfully painful to grow
The tissue is easy slain
With the bandages to know

Yet here we are

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  • Demokrit
    October 14, 2007

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    A ddp impacting poem and raw truth on what arises out of history and war even. It takes much longer to work on and with history than to start something that will not be forgotten within generations-even never.An impressingly deep work and insight which is made for the reader between the lines,the thinker and not for the "seconds-reader".


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 4, 2007
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    Welcome to All Poetry

    This is really a stunning write! You have penned such truth in this. It is quite emotional and strong in it's imagery!
    Wonderful penneing.
    Thank you so much for sharing.
    If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
    Gaylene

    • Eponymous
      October 7, 2007
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      Thanks :-)

      Thank you very much Gaylene you are most gracious.
      Regards,
      Brett