his hands are as soft as the thought of angels wings
creator of life
god is in all things
his tender touch adds nothing but love
just an artist behold the beauty above
all that surronds us and all that we see
the beauty of the ocean and the beauty of trees
just a coit of paint
he threw from his hand and thus created color through out and for man
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A contest entry
- LOTS AND LOTS OF POINTS by God is my reality.
900 points, ended October 7, 2007, 8 entries
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this is a very beautiful poem. you know that is pretty much the truth. now if only would understand that all man is created by god and all colours included. maybe then people would stop being prejuduse and races and love eachother as the same we treat our families. well one of these days all of those people will be sorry they ever thought that way. i know we wont cause we try our best to look at everone equally. i know also that is hard cause of the ones that push us to anger. but i always remember that god sees everything....
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"his tender touch adds nothing but love
just an artist behold the beauty above ..."
It shows the deep enthusiasm on your subject!!
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Very Beautiful this piece is. Very Peaceful like.
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i can really see how passionate you are about him.
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God's creation is our recreation!
Everything beautiful is God's creation and that is ugly is man's ignorance!Variety is the God's choice!Even the color of eyes or the shine in the hair is different and the lover of beautyshall never miss to see it. Great thought provoking write.Thank you for sharing my sweet Raggy
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Beautiful
Yes on Gods canvas we do reside
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he threw from his hand and thus created color through out and for man
shall I praise him or you who have identified him to bring this great poem..? well done..
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This is a fantastic poem, your rhyming is right on and the beauty of the words add softness and inspiring imagery.
Fantabulous!
Adam
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this is good. you have a heart of rhyme. your thoughts tell your soul. smile. just wanted to touch base. say hello.
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I love it soo much. It is sooooooooo good. Beautiful. It is just.....WOW.... Great job. You made such a gorgeous connection. Excellent Write
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Your opening line was the perfect attention-getter as it was catchy, emotional, and beautiful all wrapped up into one phrase. The rest of it flowed and followed so well after, too. You created such a vivid and lovely scene within your words, and it has the feeling as if a sunray descended down upon my shoulder. Excellent job.
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