Tempests and storms all on sunny days,
Raging in forms of unfriendly ways.
Moments of peace caught in moments of fire,
Things led 'round by mere human desire.
I'm caught in your arms, for a while at least.
Funny how love clouds man from beast.
Please tell me what you think
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Simply Profound!
Wow! I can hardly believe that you're young, even remotely so. This is just brilliant!
Is it brief, insightful, masterfully expressive, and one of the most perfect poems I've ever read!! Never, ever, stop writing!
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How...?
This poem, excuse me for my first post, is amazing. Its simple, yet your refined choice of words it unique and utterly breathtaking. As well your regard for love, as the folly which separates us from beast, is...spectacular to say the least.
Marvelous expression and beautiful contours which it has given to me.
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Thank you very much.
I appreciate you taking the time to look at, and comment on one of my poems. I do have a question though, you titled your comment as "How...?" I'm not sure what this means.
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