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Floating--Alone

The world is underwater

The foundations have crumbled away

Uprooted, all floats away

Further and further from my grasping fingertips

Desperately searching for answers

for meaning

for a connection

for anything

floating...



Alone



floating in an endless realm of blue, writhing, twirling, eyes wide open--ignoring the searing pain of the salt of hypocrisy

losing my breath, the water filling my lungs

the world is oppressive in its emptiness

How can something so hollow be so heavy?

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