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Die for you.

Die for us,
die for them,
die for you.

Enjoy the sound,
enjoy the nation,
the depth was found.
All of the aggravation.

Its no good,
we burn it down.
The celebration.

life's not fine,
can't you see.
They see though all you lies.

Die for us.
Die for them.
Die for you.

The life you can choose,
filled with lies,
and fails truth.

Hear that sound?
Do you hear your nation?
The lies were found.
Their filled with frustration.

They hurt you all over again,
Not trying to hold your hand.
Maybe someday you will grow,
maybe some day you will know?

I didn't have to know you,
To know your not going to be there tomorrow.
You won't be walking down this road.
You heart might just explode.

 

Sorrow for the broken hallo.

See deep inside you voice and swallow.

Don't forget to turn out the city lights.

Before you put up the fight.



Die for us,
Die for them.
Die for you.

Author notes

This is quite pointless, But It means something to me. Not really sure though. And i know it dont make any sence.

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  • HugsForEveryone
    October 4, 2007

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    Omg. Wow. This definitely means a lot to ME, too. Very deep and emotional. I don't think it's pointless! Don't say that.
    This seems kinda dark...
    I hope you're ok.


  • BeautifulFlame
    October 3, 2007

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    This is very deep and i am sure the meaning is clearer than we think !
    I enjoyed reading this as your poetry is so profound!
    Goodluck

  • Mercury Rising
    October 3, 2007

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    As long as your poem has meaning for you, that's all that matters. I rather enjoyed reading this piece, and I admire the effort you put into it. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.

    David