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Goodbye to Writing

This may be my last write
as terrorists take away this right.
They spread disease in paper and ink.
Now we cannot scribe, only think.
I will miss you paper, and you pen,
I do not know if we will meet again.
If they can use it, we destroy it,
That is what the GOV's see fit.
I don't know if writing this will make me die,
but I do know that this is... goodbye.

Author notes

I dunno, if they can put bombs in water bottles and now we can't bring our drinks, then what's next? Paper-touch explosives? Pen-C4?

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  • bloodpoet13
    March 22, 2008
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    god help me if this is the next resort. i need my paper and pens to survive in this cruel world.


  • Marzipan
    October 14, 2007

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    I do hope that isn't the next step, I don't think I'd survive without my notepad and pens
    Great write x

  • Sekhmet666
    October 5, 2007
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    Very nicely said. I saw the title and actually thought you were done with the site.


  • crimsonfury
    October 3, 2007

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    it is a harrowing thought, isn't it? you portrayed it well. yet somehow, to me, the end rhyme seems to trivialise the message a little.


  • samara11278
    October 3, 2007
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    Seriously.
    What the hell is this world coming to?
    Good job.

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