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Last is First

Contours of memory.
Memory of you.
You and me.
Me without you.
You long gone.
Gone from thought.
Thought to love.
Love is not.
Not for sale.
Sale: this heart.
Heart: slightly broken.
Broken in again.
Again I fail.
Fail every time.
Time to leave.
Leave me last.
Last is first.
First to go.

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  • VampireShadow
    February 7, 2008

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    This is pretty cool...kind of abstract and original. It's an awesome way to write a poem...as long as it doesn't get too long.

    ~Jess


  • A-Sky-Lark
    January 22, 2008
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    i love it, kinda abstract the way it goes from thought to thought. like it.


  • sweet-loving
    December 10, 2007
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    you have a great talent dont ever forget it this is a great poem like the rest


  • samara11278
    October 3, 2007

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    Awesome. As always.

    I love the format.


  • CatastrophicSmile
    October 3, 2007

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    omg... wow... once again this is an amazing write. I can relate to this so well. wow, I might be speechless.
    X♥X

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