Like a winding path set mysteriously before a prisoner, darkened by the shadows of silvery twisted oaks, and sunshine patched, like tiles simultaniously set before one anouther in a grand mansion hall...
The wind flickers at a rouge flame, black as sin, but white as love, stars forsake their shine- the cross is wooden, crimson blood mingles down like small teardrops from a child's soft sorrow...
I stare half-fearfully and semi-confused at a man, clothed in a white hospital gown,lying bulged and disfigured below my gaze, the air is limp and light dimly visible...
Druel streams into a murky pool, drenching the bed covers and newly bleached sheets, from the last contender, prisoner rather of death- the cancer is ever present within his milky glazed eyes- emotion is scarce...paralyzed in the darkness...
"Perhaps he will die, maybe not; Darryle is awfully pale and almost inanimate...now he fades...
"Darryle where are you running, is the pathway long-Come back!" Screaming,rage and fear- sorrow most often...
Mother will cry, she bites her lip and trembles like a small cub encircled by predators, she feels the weight placed upon her, the need to be, something more...
Her tears, like small glass raindrops fall upon a heaving bony chest, a golden cross is reflecting what ribbons of light suggest, I think she could fill the Nile in Egypt with her pain, the Tigris and Euphrates would cause overwhelming panic...
"I am caught between who I am, who I might become,what I need and want..."
Perplexity, causes my knees to break beneath, I am for once speechless as the man, I never really understood attempts to speak of kindness...
Mumbling like a babbled child, perhaps at life's last moments, time stills and the oak filed path becomes more visible than ever before, and you hear soft whispers, though not understanding- And suddenly you feel flame and water quenching like a rush, your hair flows in the glittered peices of sunlight which envelop your whole form, and you are set free- washed like a dove, wings mended...and flight...
At this moment the trail was forged, saturated within the luminosity of each beam, embraced by a patient hand, quietly you speak- "Who are you?"
The white man gently replies, " I am love, I died for you- sacrifice isn't easy you know?... But you were lost, like a black flame, but now your found, my son!"...
The air lifts into a tranquil hum, and the light in Darryle's eyes dimmed- like a black flame, he was a lone wolf, and I loved him in a sort I couldn't understand, till this day when peace will abide, and I feel him in the soft whispers of an autumn breeze that twists and plays with each strand of my hair... I was his daughter of a sort and I know he loved me, like the sun that cherishes its creation in a child's smile...
"Darryle- I love you, I miss you, I forgive you!"...
The wind flickers at a rouge flame, black as sin, but white as love, stars forsake their shine- the cross is wooden, crimson blood mingles down like small teardrops from a child's soft sorrow...
I stare half-fearfully and semi-confused at a man, clothed in a white hospital gown,lying bulged and disfigured below my gaze, the air is limp and light dimly visible...
Druel streams into a murky pool, drenching the bed covers and newly bleached sheets, from the last contender, prisoner rather of death- the cancer is ever present within his milky glazed eyes- emotion is scarce...paralyzed in the darkness...
"Perhaps he will die, maybe not; Darryle is awfully pale and almost inanimate...now he fades...
"Darryle where are you running, is the pathway long-Come back!" Screaming,rage and fear- sorrow most often...
Mother will cry, she bites her lip and trembles like a small cub encircled by predators, she feels the weight placed upon her, the need to be, something more...
Her tears, like small glass raindrops fall upon a heaving bony chest, a golden cross is reflecting what ribbons of light suggest, I think she could fill the Nile in Egypt with her pain, the Tigris and Euphrates would cause overwhelming panic...
"I am caught between who I am, who I might become,what I need and want..."
Perplexity, causes my knees to break beneath, I am for once speechless as the man, I never really understood attempts to speak of kindness...
Mumbling like a babbled child, perhaps at life's last moments, time stills and the oak filed path becomes more visible than ever before, and you hear soft whispers, though not understanding- And suddenly you feel flame and water quenching like a rush, your hair flows in the glittered peices of sunlight which envelop your whole form, and you are set free- washed like a dove, wings mended...and flight...
At this moment the trail was forged, saturated within the luminosity of each beam, embraced by a patient hand, quietly you speak- "Who are you?"
The white man gently replies, " I am love, I died for you- sacrifice isn't easy you know?... But you were lost, like a black flame, but now your found, my son!"...
The air lifts into a tranquil hum, and the light in Darryle's eyes dimmed- like a black flame, he was a lone wolf, and I loved him in a sort I couldn't understand, till this day when peace will abide, and I feel him in the soft whispers of an autumn breeze that twists and plays with each strand of my hair... I was his daughter of a sort and I know he loved me, like the sun that cherishes its creation in a child's smile...
"Darryle- I love you, I miss you, I forgive you!"...
A contest entry
- Options! Prewrites accepted. by after-silence.
900 points, ended July 14, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How has the death of a loved one effected you, has it grown and shaped you- or has it protruded it's shadow in fear upon you- it's time to let go.
Comments
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Wow. Nice story, and well-written. The imagery and symbolism are great. Thanks for entering my contest
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YOUR IMAGERY IS VERY IMPRESSIVE,
YOUR WORDS FLOW SO GRACEFULLY ,
I KNOW THE PEACE THAT YOU CAN FIND IN THE STILLNESS
IN ALL OF GODS CREATIONS,
AND YOU HAVE CAPTURED IT PERFECTLY.
IT IS THE LETTING GO OR SIMPLY ACCEPTING
THAT CREATES SUCH SERENE FREEDOM WITHIN.
I AM IN AWE OF YOUR WORDS
THEY ARE BRILLIANT!
GOD BLESS...


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Thankyou AP Mother, for the beautiful comment. You are loved dearly! God bless!
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