indian summer
heavy headed sunflower
decapitated
A contest entry
- Haiku Workshop-Fragments and Phrase by azure85.
790 points, ended October 16, 2007, 33 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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ooh, interesting...
yeah, indian summers can be like that... even the sunflower can't seem to stand the sun.. especially during may-july.. i keep getting heat rashes..
i like the image you've expressed in this.. quite a chilling image actually.. but effective..
congrats on the bronze.
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I read your "sunflower" haiku. this one is also excellent. once again, good luck in the contest.
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Welcome to our workshop.
indian summer
heavy headed sunflower
decapitated
A seasonal haiku, and it works very well. Thank you so much for this haiku. -
Thank you for entering our workshop.
indian summer
heavy headed sunflower
decapitated
I like this haiku. Much is said in just a few words and the vision of the sunflower is very vivid
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