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for her the world

a long list of pain
a short list of happiness
no matter what I'm felling
i always remember one thing
the love i was denied
the love that could have come from one person only
the love i pain for
i love her but she is so far away
both physically and emotionally
so long i have desired her
but she never desired me
i had to deal with "just friend"
i wanted more but that would have to do
she delivered blow after blow
never knowing she had
every day i would look at her
and she would look back
just not in the same way
for her my love is eternal
for me her love is nonexistent
i would give her the world
if she would except it

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the person this is about will know it if she reads it i have long desired her and she knows it

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  • ley527
    January 28, 2008
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    i know this feeling all to well


  • chyld of the shadow
    December 4, 2007

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    i know, i know, i know, i hate that you feel this way. me bein who i am surely cant stand to see such words of agony comin from you. i love you bro, that isnt the same, but it should lift your heart a little.....


  • crimson rose avarus
    October 16, 2007

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    i liked your poem tim, i don't know whether you were talking about me or not but i like the way you put this poem.


  • bloodislikewine
    October 3, 2007
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    beautiful

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