leaves in autumn breeze
spiral slowly to the ground
a squirrel scurries
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it up beautifully in such short verse".
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; Any poets that have not won Gold, Silver, or Bronze in the previous 4 contests listed below and are not displayed on group page. by InBetweenThoughts.
1050 points, ended November 12, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haiku by piccola.
600 points, ended July 14, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short poems about the Autumn Season by The Fun House.
950 points, ended November 2, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love the animal
This reminds me of my youth; watching the animals on the mountain at fall time. Lovely piece here
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Nice job. No caps as it should be and the count is right on. The only thing I might change is the letter a in the 2nd line. The count wouldn't change if you worded it; squirrel scurrying.
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aww the sweet thoughts of season and the sweet hint of its little life forms. wonderful job with this
best wishes to you in the contest
Tory -
Wow. I loved this. The way you described what was going on was fantastic. Not only did you mention wind and leaves (two very important parts of nature--no matter what season), but you included the animals. Good job.
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Awe I like this Great Haiku.
Best of luck to you in the contest
Delila
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