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Fallen Pedals of Beautiful Flowers

See the old man
Selling flowers on the road
How unfortunate to be him

Worn clothes and wilted roses
Tires brush past old shoes
As if he ceases to exist

Walking on the white line
He strives to continue
Few coins in his pocket

Responsibilities dwindle
Freedom is bountiful
With flowers in his hands

See the old man
Selling flowers on the road
How I'd long to be him

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  • SilverMoonFeathers
    October 29, 2007
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    Very true if only if only life were that easy and bush didn't make the U.S look so cheesy XD


  • Wonderingwhy
    October 8, 2007
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    simple life, simple problems. enviable. Nice sean.