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Bliss

Dark hair cascaded over the Domme's pale shouders as she unleashed it from its tightly pinned bun.
"My darling, you're radiant. Don't be shy." I watched as she slid her slender figure out of the tank top, exposing full, perked breasts, and gently dropped her shorts to the ground. Her thigh curved from the crotch of her cotton panties in a way that left my utterly breathless. I edged toward her, hesitantly, running my fingers down the boning on my leather corset. I held up a length of rope, and wrapped it around her pale back, under her chest, over and across her shoulders, then again till it formed a beautiful shuji harness. The purple of the rope brought out the best in her skin.
While i unlaced my boots, she slinked to the bed with feline movements. I felt gently of the slit between my legs as she beckoned to me. I'd never been so wet. So ready.
Stradling her hips, i reached to handcuff her to the headboard. "Ready?" I asked in eager anticipation.
"Never more in my life."
I sunk my teeth in to the soft flesh of her shoulder and gently bit, running my hands up and down the curves of her sides. I rolled to lay next to her, and gently massaged her swollen clit, elicting a soft moan from her lips. Faster, but softer i rubbed, teasing and taunting her, making her beg for it. I positioned myself between her legs, and licked the tip of her clit, kissing slowly downwards, licking up her wetness as i go. It tasted sweet, and perfect, like nothing Id ever tasted. I sunk my tounge slowly into her tight cunt, hearing her gasp, and grasp for the headboard. She arched her back in rhythm as i sunk in and out, faster and faster, then licking upwards to massage her clit. I grabbed her legs, and heaved one over each shoudler. As i licked her clit, i took my other hand to push one finger deep into her, then two, then three, faster and faster as i furiously rubbed her clit with the tip of my tounge. I stopped breifly and sat up, positioning myself to scissor, rubbing our wetness against each other, massaging our clits together, I reached to fondle her nipple, and i heard her begin to climax. Harder and harder, i rubbed against her, faster and faster until with one deep sigh between the two of us, our bodies relaxed in bliss.

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  • Ntagatf
    October 14, 2007

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    i love this, however i wish you had continued... u left me wanting more... so in conclusion, Great write!!!


  • tanzanite
    October 5, 2007

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    Hot image you painted here. I liked the things I saw in my mind. You did a good job although I would say that this can be even better if you try and play on other senses as well, other than sight and touch. You could also look at the way you structure the piece to make it more compartmentalised. Try to steer away from only describing. Live the piece. Also there was a slight piece of confusion for me when you switched from "her" to "I".

    I think you could make this as good as it is hot. I do hope you realise that I am not trying to be mean, but merely trying to help and give you my view on this piece.