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Drink from my cauldron of love
Provoke the spirit of lust
Dance with me hand in hand in my cemetery of lost love
Scream out our song of worship
To those before us who we loved and lost
No longer Zombies of hate
We now dance under the full moon
Come with me my minion share this blood with me
Let it consume our body and souls
Let us drown in the fog of love

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  • ckwriter69
    October 6, 2007

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    nice write Jennifer, I love the descriptions and images you brought out with this write. very dark and yet with a lot of love. Thanks for sharing and congrats on the bronze.


  • Scandalous Beauty
    October 3, 2007
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    I love it. Dark and sexy!!! YES YES!!!!!

    Guin

  • Yoishan
    October 3, 2007

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    rawr!

    I love this, its really good Jen. Like always hehe seems a bit ritualistic just a bit hehe... but with spunkyness ... nice poem keep them coming


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    October 3, 2007

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    Ooooo...Jenn...I like this! Dancing in the cemetery, seeking lost love. Gives Az the NICE chills! "Let us drown in a fog of love." "Provoke the spirit of lust." I love this. Can envision it. Thanks for the entry...best of luck!

    Happy Halloween Sweety!

    Love~
    Az