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Harvest Moon (haiku)

blushing globe ignites
lambent embers caress earth
nature's harvest sought

Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 6, 2007

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    This haiku is definitely well penned. It offers wonderful visions and a peaceful feeling both! Loved it.Fantastic creation, best of luck in the contest

  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 8, 2007

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    Quite Lovly

    this is a very lovly well penned haiku and I love the way it flowed through out,. you really did a nice lil job placing this poem together. keep up the good work

  • Princess Perdue gold member
    October 6, 2007

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    Simply beautiful. Well done and good luck in the contest with this lovely entry.

    Shaz xx


  • vindicativevisage
    October 6, 2007

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    Well done...as always. I really liked how sensual this was, especially when you used the word "caress". Beautiful piece. Good job.

  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 5, 2007

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    Awe I like this suppurb Haiku!!
    Best of luck to you in the contest


    Delila

  • deleteit
    October 5, 2007

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    This haiku is definitely one well worth reading! It offers wonderful visions and a peaceful feeling both! Fantastic creation, best of luck in the contest

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