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a world of her own

lost in a world
of her own
with nowhere to go
no real toys to play with

dressed in prim and proper dresses
hair done neatly
eyebrows in perfect shape
no an inch of a flaw on her face

but her heart's filled
with scars and bruises

the beautiful garden
with roses and frogs
is her only escape

there she finds a golden egg
glowing from within
seeming almost blinding
but with such a warm feeling
radiating from within

given to her by her fairy friend
she wonders where it would lead her to

for once she feels
a sense of true happiness
in a world on her own

but it's such a pity
she's only six

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  • Summer Dawn
    October 8, 2007
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    yes it is sad when loneliness hits children so young. i was one of those young ones. lovely poem.