I know you've had a bad day, you've closed your eyes
You've got nothing left to give, so you want to hide
In your mind, there isn't a single safe place left to go
Don't believe in the lie, run into the arms you know
No ones ment to make it,outside, all on their own
When there's no hope left and all you can do is moan
There's no hope left and the way ahead is dark
you're so much braver then you think you are
Someday's take a miracle, God knows it's true
When the tar of life is stuck to you with glue
When there's nothing in you ready for another day
You pick up the pieces, you try and walk away
There'll always be a part of you that still bleeds
No matter what happens, no matter if you succeed
Th constant reminder, I know you've heard it before
Will make you stronger, build up your inner core
And I'm sorry, that your world is crumbling down
And I'm sorry, that lifes such a painful crown
But one thing you've always gotta believe
Hope is out there, you just gotta breathe
Somewhere there is meaning
Somewhere there is feeling
Somewhere, somewhere there is healing
Somewhere there is a way to cope
Somewhere, out there, there is hope.
Author notes
well.. when i wrote this i had this tune in my head...
and its kinda like a song... but i dno.
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It's beautiful. Very encouraging and special. I'm sure it will help a lot of people heal. Great job and thanks for reading our poem.
Guin
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it's probly one of ur best. it's incredible. a brilliant message told beautifully. the rhyming is marvelous and wow i have a lot of descriptive words going on here lols. it's great and i love the way you used the word crown and the way that has deeper meaning that u haven't spelt out for dumb dumbs.
love u bekknessssss
it's wonderful
tigger
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very nice write, it does have a lyrical feel to it. Good rhymes and very heartfelt and with a lot of tender emotions brought out. Thank you for sharing.
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Bek!
This is awesome.
I love it.
The message is great as cameron said.
Bravo on the great work
Your son,
Sean
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and applause, woops
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i love it =)
you can feel the rythm jumping off the page
it sounds great
and it's a great message
brilliant bekatory
love it
seej
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