I was under her spell for many years,
her sexual charm drew me to this witch,
I gave the best nine years of my life,
to this skanky little bitch.
Well tonight I have been given special powers,
pay back for the years you had me by the dick,
Now to find where you will be tonight,
will be my first of magic trick,
I close my eyes and repeat these words,
Show me where to find her,
the one who tore out my heart,
I wish to give her a taste of how I felt,
tonight is when her pain is going to start.
I am up in a puff of smoke,
in a room a guy on top of a drunk you,
wow this guy has probably known you what 5 minutes,
and you are already begging for a screw.
He hears a noise I wish I was invisible,
you shiver and I blow on ya neck like a gentle breezes,
he moans just the wind out side baby,
he gets you on your knees.
Oh my god you gone down in the world,
this guy is hung like a new born child,
then again you were not much in bed anyway,
a mere finger would drive you wild.
Go ahead Stephanie slip him into ya mouth,
boy will you get a big surprise,
I say the words,
Give new born dick,
king kongs dick,
make it bust out one of her eyes.
I laugh when I see you choke and gag,
you scream what the fuck is going on here,
I smile and say within,
this is nothing you got plenty more to fear.
I will calm it down for now,
I want you to get your fuck after all,
when you have and he has gotten what he wants,
thats when your world is going to fall.
I watch you bored as he try's so hard, calling you a slut,
to try and turn himself on more,
I have to admit he is right there, you are a slut,
but when we fucked you always preferred to be called a whore.
He moans shit I am going to cum,
I close my eyes and say within,
Let the rubber break,
let his semen swim free,
let it go inside the one
they call Stephanie.
He screams oh shit,
I think is busted,
you scream you fucker,
get out of me now you bastard.
So here you sit now,
a baby boy you had,
you were going to have and abortion,
I thought someone had to tell your dad.
I wrote a letter that night,
I put it in his draw,
daddy's baby girl he found out,
was a little whore.
So with my magic I did what,
I had to do,
you fucked me over bad Stephanie,
this is my way of saying FUCK YOU!!!!
A contest entry
- Cast a Spell by Manda Kathryn.
600 points, ended October 13, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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God, I love ya, your writes are great. I know there is pain, even so you put it so well.
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I wrote a letter that night,
I put it in his draw,
daddy's baby girl he found out,
was a little whore.
love that stanza! this is such a powerful yet entertaining write, love the idea that you got your own back. good write! -
Peculiar write but your muse worked well with it, interesting it holds the attention and plays on emotion too exactly as a good poem should! Well done!
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Wow - funny, very powerful, passionate - all what you want in a poem such as this. Another pleasant surprise
Another fab poem!
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LMFOA
Brilliantly write. Had me laughing all throughout the poem. I put down my drink after the first stanza so i would not spew it all over the monitor
"I was under her spell for many years,
her sexual charm drew me to this witch,
I gave the best nine years of my life,
to this skanky little bitch."
Every stanza is f***in great...Wow! the revenge, i can surely feel the anger an hate. don't get me wrong, i knew your piece would be a wild ride and you did not disappoint me at all. HELL YEAH GREAT JOB!
"Go ahead Stephanie slip him into ya mouth,
boy will you get a big surprise,
I say the words,
Give new born dick,
king kongs dick,
make it bust out one of her eyes....
So with my magic I did what,
I had to do,
you fucked me over bad Stephanie,
this is my way of saying FUCK YOU!!!"
BRAVO! One hell-of-a spell
Hope you had fun in our Spell casting party
I wish you the very best in the contest!
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Thank you for your magical entry
G'day James R
I couldn't help but laugh at this; forgive me.
Because I know you and what you have been through I couldn't help but simply love this write
The last stanza is 'magic' to my ears and eyes darling
Best of luck in our contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Holy moly! Definitely got your message through with this write, bro. Don't hold back, let it all out!
Intense write, hope you feel better and can use your magic for some good stuff now.
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Woh!
this surprised me, it was sinister for awhile! very strong write, very sad though-hopefully not true! I like the way you used the idea of spells to write about such an angry subject. It worked very well!
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oh brother that hairy lasso is a mighty powerful weapon
makes grown men cry the lesson all females learn in life is the power held between their legs. Nicely penned brother dearest.Pleasure to read good luck in the contest
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