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Awake

Inspired by I'm not ok


awake
motionless
He lies in his bed
He sees not a thing
He hears not a word
his time soon to be up
Only the paperwork remains
his love is strong still
Her sadness grows
She keeps vigil
in her chair
all alone
awake

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  • Naridill
    October 8, 2007

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    Very gripping piece. The form was a beautiful extra touch, it also helps the flow alot. Emotionally enthralling, nicely penned.

    Thanks for entering & much luck.


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    October 3, 2007

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    This is such a sad poem you have written here. And its so beautiful at the same time. WEll done and all the best for the contest.