Gracefully gloomy
White streams
Which drop as tears fallen
This is the time of heartache
The time of letting go
Mixing forever
The taste of your lips
With my tears
I am listening now
Though there is nothing left to hear
Standing bravely
With my melancholy smile
Singing hymns unbidden
The fallen
Unloved
A dream of pain
Why do i hold on to this
This rainy day
My mutability
Unseen hurt
The saddest array
My star is forever gone
This deep affection
I hold so dear
Chasing the specter
Of your love
I still fight the letting go
Venus
You left a scar
Oh this tear
These last tears
Fall at my lonely feet
Is this heart turned to savage stone
I
The crumbled saint
Whose soft motion
Adores her
As she lays on
My last tears
Steven Mels
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful yet so sad
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AWESOME!!!!!
Son:
This is a very awesomeread, the emotions overflow,
and the reality of it can hit anyone's heart.....
You have touched this reader's heart, with your words,
as the pain -I have felt it as well...- is totally rich.....
I pray for your wellbeing, and may inner spiritual peace
touch your heart and give you strength to continue on;
writing and reaching your reader's soul.....
Thank you for sharing with me on this site, God bless you,
MoM
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I love this it's amazing and i liked the way you used the metaphor of Venus for the woman in your life... it's simply amazing how you put all your feelings into it...
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I need a tissue after reading your words that bleed from the heart. So well spoken. A wonderful job of expressing love's heartache.
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This just tears at the heart and soul, sweetie
I can relate to this one; have been there and done that more times than I care to count
I wish for you brighter days and better tomorrow's and know you have my friendship for always -
dark despair
Despair of lost love written in this prose, images of sadness flow in a melancholy song , tears fall as love that falls away.
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very sad and emotional, but very well put together, a lot of power went into this write, and it really shows, very well written
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This is such a wonderful poem. The words seep with such sadness and despair and this is just so full of emotion and heartache. WEll done for writing such a beautiful piece, I just hope you are not feeling as down as this, but nonetheless, this is really a stunning write. Well done.
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