Because of You
She engaged herself to pills and booze
This whole game made her so broken and loose
That next day she hung herself on a noose
All those people are blood sucking freaks
With their gossip and vulture curious beaks
You always hung around super geeks
But they're so much better than plastic fakes
So stand up f***ing tall
I'll have your back against mine
But as they say we're out of line
Even in death, we'll be together
But when we're there
As our cold dead hands collide
But it's better when you're not alive
In this cruel world there's no one you can confide
Author notes
Its about two best friends that both die.But one had feelings for the other one
A contest entry
- Pain and Depression by thedevilsgirl.
475 points, ended November 16, 2007, 55 entries
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Comments
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Damn girl... you could easily make short stories... or even novels out of this dramatic pieces you got here. Why don't you try doing that? Well good luck in the contest.
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Thanks so much
Ive been thinking about compiling my poems in this huge book...hehehe.Thanks again for being so considerate and tolerant of my poems.Your comments are astonishing
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btw...i pretty much say stoo when im excited. idk what it means. haha
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Hahaha
STOO
Hehehe
Thanks for the applaud
MCR kinda based
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NICE! dont you sound emo. hehehehehe I LOVE IT STOO!!!
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Thanks Lil
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