Whenever the walls feel like they're closing in on me,
There you are to tell me it'll all be OK
Whenever I'm in to deep and the waves crash above me,
There you are to pull my head above water
Whenever i'm fully consumed in falmes and the pain's to much,
There you are with another bucket of water
I find it funny to think you're always there,
To look me in the eye and tell me to laugh when it's tough
Soon enough i'm in tears again and you're there to wipe them,
I know you were there through it all,
Just thought i'd let you know,
Baby, you're bad luck!
Don't worry i love you anyway
Author notes
I'm not even sure:L
A contest entry
- Teenage Love Poems (May Be Prewrites) by ChrissyJean.
330 points, ended October 8, 2007, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-Write Challenge by Nicolette Everett.
450 points, ended November 25, 2007, 71 entries
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Comments
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This is a different poem. I do like the ending where you show that he may cause things to happen, but you know you love him. So you stay with him.
Good job! -
I love it! I love how you pulled me in with the emotion and the BAM! I laugh. lol
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