There are pieces of you
all over my floor.
I have to walk past them
to get to my door.
The memory of you, the smell, the whisper
Lingers on longer than I can remember.
My inner peace I have forgotten.
Shattered and torn
Dismantled and rotten.
Get up, fool
What have I done?
It's his heart
Two become one
Don't forget
Til death do we part
A glimmer of the beginning
To a brand new start.
Flicker candle
Dancing in the wind
Dare not blow out.
Forgive my sins.
I love you.
You are my hope
Without you
it's a downward slope.
Sing me a song
Put me to rest
For you are the one
That I love best.
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inspiring!
Damn, it has been quite a long time since I have read anything form you!!! why did I ever stray!!
excellent write, i really fell in love with your formatting, it is my vice!!
I am in love with this write, for it is sweet, yet you can see that you are trying to get something across to your husband? !! great job!!!
keep the pen flowing!!!
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Thanks, that means a lot to me. I haven't written in about a year or so, and I have written a few lately but I just thought I had lost my touch. I also added a part 8 to My Senior Year. I don't know if you ever read 1-7 because it is in the erotica section but I think it is pretty good. If I keep going I could make it into an erotic novel maybe.
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this is very soft and gentle Cris. ... a lovely piece of work
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Thank you Gilly. It is about my husband. How even though he is macho he does have a fragile heart and he trusted me with it and I must do what I can to be gentle with his heart. I have a description for each stanze but it's too long. I did describe them for Chris though before I sent it to him. I appreciate your input!
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