Life passes every one by
at some point
and lifes soundtrack
slowly smuthers out
Should i cry out to the room
I am alone
and silence is yelling
Time never ticks
on my clocks
and i am never late
for nothing
Should i cry out to the room
I am alone
and silence is yelling
A contest entry
- silence by DancingRed.
300 points, ended October 16, 2007, 14 entries
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Comments
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Very interesting piece. I love the contradictions in your piece. It really leaves the reader with something to think about.
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I love the phrase 'silence is yelling'. It sets a mood of lifelike confusion.
I think it should be 'life's', third line, and 'smothers', fourth line.
Thanks for entering.
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