There is kingdom of twilights and skies
that ruled by a queen so very wise.
On her throne on a sliver moonlight
graceful moves in flight.
Her stlye reflects that of black
beauty is nothing she is of lack.
Her wings strech beyond the height
Oh what a great sight!
She carries in her hand a flower
which no one know of it true power.
The petal fall to earth
make them of great worth.
She looks down at her realm
sometimes feeling overwhelm.
To see that that stars are of playing
or to make sure the moon is staying.
Author notes
Love is a battlefield! The was the work of nene thomas picture and it's called Solace.
A contest entry
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400 points, ended November 25, 2007, 13 entries
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very nicely written! the rhyme is exceptional. but does realm and overwhelm rhyme? say them out loud to see. a few spelling mistakes but everyone has them. i can really see the picture that you described without even seeing it. best of luck in the contest. you have a good chance with this one. keep up the fabulous writing!
~horsecowgirl~
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"that ruled by queen so very wise."
Do you mean:
"that are ruled by a queen so very wise."?
Very magical. Nice atmosphere. Best of luck in the contest.
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How are also able to tell when I make edit mistakes? It talent I wish I had.
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