As the words wrote themselves upon
The dark dead pages of life
Cries of sorrow whispered harshly
Down the road that the bloody
Tears made on their way to death's
Hellbent mission of betrayal
As the screams of blackness waved
Over the sea called human life
Agitation and hate filled the hearts
Of broken pieces scattered within
The winds brittle essence that
Scratched at the coldness of skin
As the hallow feeling returned only
To haunt the livid soul once more, the
Terror of loneliness crept itself back
Into the thoughts of the deceased cells
That once filled happy memories of
Happiness that turned into lovely death
Author notes
Just thoughts on death that is once upon us.
A contest entry
- ♥~Suicidal Thoughts~♥ by Lyrical Noob.
700 points, ended January 7, 124 entries
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death has a way to effect us in many ways. i have had my share for about a solid two and a half years (approximately a year ago). i can understand the emotions you're going through. if you ever need a friend just to listen, please feel free to give me a call (you have my number), luvya, DARK.
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OH MY WOOOOOOOOOOOORD! I've missed your writing sooooo much Kahy!!!!! You work is so perfect and so beautiful and I've missed how beautiful poetry can be. I haven't written much recently but reading this has inspired me to write some more!!!!! Fantastic flow and fantastic work.
Beeeeeeeeeautiful!
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Yuni!!!
I am glad you enjoyed it. It has been ages since I've written last and I know it's a dark write, but I'm glad it has inspired you. Kahy
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Excellent write..
I really loved the flow of this piece..very nice..
Bravo..
Peace
~A~
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Asdzaa
thank you for your compliment. I am glad you loved it.
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