In the hard back book of contradiction,
One particular story reveals the meaning 100%.
This is none other than the tale of
The Demonic Angel of Retribution and Torment:
She smiles a frown at
Every laughing cry;
While dying to live,
But surviving to die.
She judges indecisively her
Prestigious, murderous preys.
With her eyes wide shut,
She casts them into an icy blaze.
Her wings are of scaly feathers,
So soft is her cutting touch.
Her face is repulsingly seductive,
She is nothing less than too much.
The Holy Demon of
Pleasurable Pain;
An unfrightening, haunting presence,
That seeks devoted worship in vain.
The most fictionous non-fiction
Never written in this non-existent book.
Read the blank pages that are not there,
With blind eyes carefully look.
Author notes
I even made up some words to make this poem flow with contradiction. I enjoyed writing this one alot.
Silvos.
Please tell me what you think
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I love the contradiction on this piece.
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I was going to suggest you enter it into a contest I just entered, but then I remembered it said no pre-writes. But it would have fit perfectly with the picture prompt.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2372386
It's called Dark Beauty. -
I like this one too. You have a good flair for poetic words that enrich the whole piece. It makes me feel so amiture, yet inspires me to do better. " I will try harder", and "Napoleon is always right." And all that, and I'm not sure why I added that in here. lol
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Wow...it's got great flow. Hope you don't mind me saying it reminds me of a song.
Very good write!!
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heheehe it's all contradictory. but makes perfect sense. most people don't get that concept. i can be optimisstically pesstimistic. or happily unhappy. but people just go... "huh" and i'm like... gawd your dumb guys.
anyways i'd say this poem is a great one. and a definant keeper.
~theharvester <--- feels like reading about me.
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She judges indecisively her
Prestigious, murderous preys.
With her eyes wide shut,
She casts them into an icy blaze.
your imagery is so descriptive, and WOW...I am stunned with Wow...her face is repulsingly seductive!!! I am left speechless, this is full of contradiction, but a very fab write in every way!!!! EXCELLENT
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