Let us take one moment;
Open our hearts and souls and
Overcome the defeat within.
Dare I tempt hidden desire?
Anchored in love's breath
Nestled upon the spiritual
Depth of intimate knowledge.
Wash away the past, and
Intoxicate me in heart's passion;
Never being alone, I find myself
Enveloped in your celebrated soul.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture- An Intimate Toast by Leanne Laine
including the quote by the artist...
"Celebrating the love and respect of a special relationship
that is ours and only ours that lasts every sleeping
and waking minute of a day,
we may be two but forever we live as one"
The image of the wine combines to portray a man and woman, entwined in perhaps celebration of that love and special relationship noted in the quote above.
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In a list
A contest entry
- PIF 12 Entries x 12 Lines x 24 Hours by intanglio2ring.
450 points, ended October 3, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oooo!
You've outdone yourself!
Not only have you created a wonderful poem but it's in an Acrostic form + the added phrase from the artist!
A very well done entry - Thanks & Good Luck!
Tang
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Oooo!
You've outdone yourself!
Done the investigation of the artist, created not only a wonderful poem but made it into an Acrostic, plus - love the background you've used!
Great entry - Thanks & Good Luck!
Tang



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I don't know which I like best!! The poem is awesome, and so is the border! Wow, you are so talented dear friend. Awesome work on both. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie





