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Carnies in the White House

Carnies in the White House
showing us the way.
We know the game is fixed,
yet we're lured to play.

Strong men lifting
Sifting sand,
Building, sculpting a new
Lay of the land.

Strong children exposed
Too much, too fast.
Finger painting names and dates
In new pourn grey grass.

Strong arms pushing
Legislation streamlined thru.
Special interests, slanted truths,
One sided testing, a filibuster or two.

Strong stands.
Strong beliefs.
Strong voiced Barkers
Trample the voice of the meek.

Strong world supported
Straight lines.  Mathematical
Down beats on

One.  Syncopation lost

Uni-hemospherical.

Strong medicines lost.
Not lost if never found.
Chopping, Searing,
A divine manifestearing mound.
A spot,
A clearing,
A pre-ordained, man-made tearing.

Carnies in the white house
Showing us the way.

We know the game is fixed,

Yet we're lured to play.

 

Step right up!

Have no fear.

There's a winner every day,

Three hundred and sixty-six

Days a year.

 

Everyone's a winner,

Every other day.

Thirteen months out of the year,

May to May.

 

Come one! Come all!

Strong or meek.

Everyone's a winner,

On the eighth day of the week.

 

Carnies in the White House

Showing us the way.

Game after game,

No win, no prize,

Yet we play and play and play and play and play and

play and play and play and play and play and play...

 

 

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  • heavenbird gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    Why isn't this in my contest anymore!?
    xDDD
    I love this poem....D:

  • heavenbird gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    This is brilliant.
    It's entirely unique, and everything I asked for in my contest.
    Very well done. =]

    Best of luck.


    • hitthispuppy
      December 4, 2008
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      That is so cool!

      Thanks for the encouraging words. I am glad you appreciated the write, it is a favorite of mine. Thanks again!!


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    October 9, 2007
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is truly brilliant! I love how you've made it a circus, because that is truly what the Government is right now. I'm from Australia and ours is just as bad.

    The imagery, the use of words, the rhyme, it all flows off the tongue like a nursery rhyme. It is excellent.

    Faerie
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    • hitthispuppy
      October 9, 2007
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      thanks faerie

      I thank you for the encouraging words. I have been on this site for a few weeks, and it is not easy to get your work read. I am happy to see that my meaning is percieved as i meant it. It is one thing to read your work to someone, and it is truly a test to put it out there for others to read. You hope that your meaning comes across as you intended. Thank you again for your feedback.

      hitthispuppy

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