Cascade of dreams, so lives my heart aflame
As water so trembles over my soul,
A gentle slumber holds me firm cajole.
Her subtle form ignites her curves reclaim,
enfolds me within her vortex of fire.
As your nails trace my lines heated luster;
So bind my hands in fiery flesh, so flustered;
and rake your nails, in torrid, urgent desire.
So nestle wanton, within our embrace,
and dream to whet hot, this sated hunger;
to feel this burning unquenchable thirst.
So purge my longings of the night encased
to rage volcanic heart, a melted monger...
So wrap my thoughts in bed, to yearn immersed...
Author notes
A sonnet for the Prompt: "Hold my hand and tickle my soul; fold me into all that is you..."
In a list
A contest entry
- Let's Blend ~ Sensual.....(18 and over ONLY) by Celticmoon.
625 points, ended October 21, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Let me know How this makes you feel, what do you think?
Comments
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The verbaige of choice within this piece leaves one in awe. Creative and alluring at the same time without sounding redundant as most may tend to express be it intentionally or unintentionally. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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Great poem! The words you use are so creative and descriptive it's amazing! I love very colorful words. Imagery is my favorite type of poetry and you seem to have used that here in the way you describe and show the feelings and thoughts. Great job!
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