daddy why have you put me throught this
i just wanted to grow up normal
you always drank and hit me with your fist
now im living on the street.
daddy why did you always hurt mom?
she loved you but you hurt her
she never did anything wrong
but i guess when your drinking your thoughts are blurred.
you could have let us grow into something good
but you were a selfish piece of shit
i just wish you understood
hopefully in years to come we will get through it.
you will get yours im sure
for the great milanko will make sure of that
the rest of us will stick together
"great milanko,cut his throat off with that"
Author notes
well my favorite song is "halls of illusion"and i kind of put it different...just let me know if you like it
oh and THE GREAT MILANKO
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*scratches her head* Sorry to hear that you have gone through this! But I really don't see what this has to do with ICP. The only part is where your asking the Great Milinko to cut your dad's head off. Good write though!
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Drowning in sorrow
...I can relate to this on more than one level.
I lived street before, and have a major
relevance to abuse and alcoholic rage.
Halls Of Illusions was amazingly crazy,
but I have to ask, did you spell "MILANKO"
like that for a specific reason?
What's that all about?
and as for content, I couldn't help but think
while reading this, that it was more of a sob story
with the words "Great MILANKO" slapped in there.
Hey, no offence, considering my psuedonym,
I'm all for sob stories, but I'm an honest person,
and I have no account for tastelessness.
However, considering, you are part of the fam,
I'll applaud you to the 2nd degree,
fore I have no hate to show here, just honesty
mcl mudda fuckoo
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Painfully Sweet
"you could have let us grow into something good
but you were a selfish piece of shit
i just wish you understood
hopefully in years to come we will get through it." I can relate to this in a way if you read some of my poems XD but this was great I really like it. Great Milenko is one of my fav albums besides The Jekyl Brothers!
Anyways keep up the great writes enter some more if you like Good luck with my contest XD
Much Clown Love,
~Jagerlette *Kimber*
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good write.
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I love it!!!
Te he he. "Halls of Illusions" is one of my favorite songs and i feel you did a good job adding onto from a different perspective.
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