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[ I feel empty, ]

I feel empty,
alone,
and afraid.

I was left,
to die,
in this wood.

I stay alive,
forever more,
'till you die.

You do not die,
I wonder why,
and I am lost.

I become lost,
in a sea of souls,
drowning on their death.

I finally die,
losing control,
being swept away by a sea of souls.

I join the souls,
in an ocean,
full of death.

Death washes over me,
driving me insane,
forcing me to madness.

I die again,
although I have already,
I fade away.

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  • Warrior-Eagle
    October 2, 2007

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    Mm. I specially like the first stanza.This poem was very detailed and awesome.Also very heartfelt Nice job here whoever you are haha.