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Spring Awakening

Sitting
Standing
Lying
Leaving
Hating
Hording
Whoring
Keeping
Up
With
The
Joneses
Crying
Dying
Leaving
Never
Letting
Emotion
Show
Listening
Breathing
Living
Swinging
Washing
It
All
Comes
Back
To
Racism
Masochism
Satainsim
And
All
Those
Damn
Christains
Sexism
Amoralism
Animism
Criticism
All
Coming
In
Full
Circle.

Author notes

Yeah this is called "Spring Awakening" Because that's the album that I was listening to when the poem popped into my head. :]


So anyway I submitted this poem to a site that I go on, for their weekly newspaper, and I got in. It's a community of kids, and because of the "and all those darn (They changed damn to darn) christains" I got compared to hitler. I found it hilarious but at the same time horribly insulting. Just a little history of this poem.

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  • forbidden-colour
    October 20, 2007
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    I loved the format.
    Just a spelling typo on Christians.

    Thank you for sharing!
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