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Twisted

My fears and my dreams
Utterly conflicting yet undeniably intertwining
I致e come to fear my dreams and dream of my fears
Years drenched with blood tears
Deep within my very existence
I have grown conscience of my devastatingly twisted mind
I search for an explainable reason
But sadly the very one I知 looking for
Is the one that I値l never find 
Every route and method I end up using
Surface themselves as the direct sources from which I am losing
I have come dangerously close to the product of their desires
Within my soul nothing but devils dancing around tall fires
I brace myself from stumbling off the very edge of the foundation that has kept me safe
I wonder, is this all just another dream from which I will awake?
But no it is my very own reality which I have carelessly created
Knee deep in my own blood yet I can not escape
Free me from my own struggle which I know you can take
I知 longing for the light in this dark world of mine
I知 dying inside and my once strong spirit, I知 unable to find

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  • Dove
    October 5, 2007

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    Welcome to the site!

    I have grown conscience of my devastatingly twisted mind
    I search for an explainable reason
    But sadly the very one I’m looking for
    Is the one that I’ll never find

    Those for lines to me seem very deep and true, I can realte to most if not all of this poem and I think you've done a great job relating your thoughts. Nice work Thank you very much for sharing your words with all of us here. I would like to take this opportunity to welcome you to Allpoetry. I know being new to a site you may have a few questions or concerns, so please feel free to ask any greeter or use the "Help" tab at the top of your page