Goal

Lips guilty with beauty
unfold to capture my heart.

Weakness races to feed
the veins of temptation.

Seductively she weeps
putting guilt on hold.

Temptation then seeps
from the doorways
of our souls

But who are we to argue
if that is both our goals...

A contest entry

seduction by Leslie. 525 points, ended October 16, 2007, 15 entries
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Leslie
October 9, 2007

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This was a good piece, with some nice touches in it, it kept the seduction to a mid level but still there, and added a great touch of sadness which I can always appreciate, I’m a lover of melancholic poetry, I liked the overall poem I felt that was easy on the eyes and still a great read… Good Job!

Thanks for your entry
Leslie
- Timespell
  October 14, 2007
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  Thank you Leslie
  I am glad you liked this poem, Thanks for reading and for your nice comment.
  
  All the best,
  
  ~T.S~
Cirket
October 3, 2007

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nicely written! good job!
Loved that poem. It was so sweet in a way! I like how you decribe the lips! Good job dude yet again you write very well! I clap for you in my heart of hearts.... *clap clap clap clap*
- Timespell
  October 7, 2007
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  Thanks Criket
  Thank you Cirket, glad you liked this short poem.
  
  All the best,
  
  ~T.S~