My body is flowing with desire,
already my juices are dripping.
He comes to me with a satin rope,
he ties me up and the thought of what he will do to me is titillating.
He gets a pillow an places it under my hips to expose my most pleasurable spot.
He teases me with his mouth and only he can satisfy my aching desire deep within my loins.
He kisses my lips and gives it a little nip,
blood drips and this is exciting to the both of us.
I reach down and pull him up to me,
still tied up he both teases and pleasures me.
I beg him to let me go and he does.
I grab him,
he is ready for me and I stroke him up and down.
His hardness shows me that he is as excited as I am.
I fuck him with my mouth,
my tongue savors every inch of his cock.
I force him down my throat and take him all in.
His moans are becoming low screams,
I know he is ready to go.
His wet lips suck my breasts and my hands reach out and touch my entire body.
He spreads my legs and licks my clit to ecstacy,
He fingers me and I am about to explode.
I beg him to fuck me,
I cant take it anymore.
Finally he enters me and my explosion is near.
The deeper he goes the closer I come.
Faster and faster,
harder and harder,
deeper and deeper.
He plunges into me.
I can feel him pulsate, he is close, too.
One last thrust and we both cum,
It is earthshaking.
I lay there, legs shaking and I am in heaven.
Author notes
OPtion 1
A contest entry
- Wicked Games and Lithium Dreams [18+] by Immortal Obscurity.
900 points, ended October 19, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - give me love, give me passion, give me sex(prewrites allowed) by Viyanna Rosemarie.
400 points, ended October 25, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i would like to thank you very much for your wonderful entry into this contest. i am wishing you the best of luck in all your future writings and in this contest as well. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the very near future. viyanna rosemarie
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HOT
damn..girl..makes me wanna touch myself.. or at least attack my husband.. you and your erotica..the deeper he goes the closer I come..and your ending is fantastic.. excellent write... good luck in the contest.
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Much better
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*deep breath*
WOW! That was AMAZING! I honestly don't think I've ever seen the word 'fuck' used in such a non-pornographic way! It fit with the poem, and it was really, really hot! Seriously, I was breathing hard by the end of this!
The only change I would make is to the line, "I play with myself as he does this". Maybe make it fit a little better with the rest of the poem. Other than that, though... Extremely well done!
Good luck.
L.
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