Your back, your front,
Your left side, your right side.
That's what I love about you.
Your top, your bottom.
Charms you got 'em.
That's what I love about you.
You gotta be somebody's dream come true.
You are. You're mine.
I like you fine. And you are.
That's just one reason I love you.
If I had my choice of all the men in the world
(And who says I don't?)
You're the one I'd want
To be mine.
Not a hard decision.
You're the only thing that I'm addicted to.
Nothing means a thing if I don't have you.
You've done so very much to prove your love is true.
That's what I love about you.
Author notes
To David Lee.............if you will read it out loud, you may be able to pick up on the melody.
A contest entry
- I Found It! Have you? by Nicole Cudworth.
900 points, ended November 6, 2007, 27 entries
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Comments
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Nothing means a thing if I don't have you.
You've done so very much to prove your love is true.
That's what I love about you.
This is a melody of the heart..and words are representing the beauty of life here..well done..

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I can see you love him very much! You've got a nice pattern of rhyme going here...
Thank you for your entry. Love and luck in all you endeavor!



