My lies blending in with the background,
a simple glance changing time itself.
My mood changes with the wind,
nobody knowing what is going threw my head.
Bite and glare,
snap and snare in a trap.
Eaten alive by my own emotion,
straining to keep going.
Some days a I will be alive,
a loving jew in a stack of diamonds.
Craving smiles and happiness,
lies and decietes not affecting me.
Others I will glare,
thinking about how I will turn you.
Beating you in my mind waves,
a simple craving of my own reward.
But do you like one better,
or do you dispise both?
I only cravy something more than attention,
so give me truth and move on with it.
A contest entry
- Truth. by Kelsey-Jo.
1700 points, ended October 17, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is definitely a unique perspective--something different and original. Watch your spelling errors and typos, though, as they draw attention away from your poem.
Kelsey-Jo -
this was a strong write with alot of emotion and feeling to it
it was beautifully written and i loved it
well done and best of luck
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