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Gift

Perfect beyond measure
Eternal, ageless
Creator's Spirit
Dwelling within
Undying, unending
Gift from the Father
Never forsaking
Always with Him

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  • Ladybug
    November 2, 2007

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    a beautiful reminder of the undying love that He carries for us from up above till we reunite with Him.

    nicely done


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    October 5, 2007

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    There is nothing more perfect or eternal than God. Truly a gift to us all. Thank you for this lovely entry.

    ~Lyrical


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 5, 2007

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    A lovely spiritual theme to this poem... indeed, the Creator's Spirit lives on and will never forsake us and you conveyed that truth very clearly in your poem. I must admit I'm not a fan of capitalizing at the beginning of each sentence - it kind of slows the reading but that is just my personal opinion. Thank you so much for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette