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Speechless

His walk,
his talk,
his smell,
his taste.

I am so addicted to him and cant break the habbit.
I am so in love and cant lose it.

Couldn't trade him in for a million dollars.
Couldnt trade him in for a dream house.
Couldnt trade him in at all cause he's mine.

This poem might not make alot of sense, but if you really think about it it dose.

The love I have for him is deep...
Its breath-taking...
Its heart-racing...
Its speechless...

Please tell me what you think

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  • Number 13
    October 29, 2007
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    hehe I know the feeling ^^
    It's amazing, is it not?
    great write

  • Acidanthra
    October 2, 2007

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    Not really into love poems, so I cannot honestly give you a comment. But, I would do a spell check, because there are some words that need to be edited.


  • onesugar gold member
    October 2, 2007

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    Oh Damique
    I know this feeling all to well
    going through something similar myself
    we are addicted to each other, it's all consuming
    it is speechless.
    This is from the heart and well expressed it meant something to me
    Love ~sugar~