Walking a road of blood stains
Cracked and carved with my pain
Lightening lashes across my skin
And thunder rocks my world of sin
Looking here and looking there
Trying to run away from my fear
With a deep breath I let loose a scream
Locked I am within this nightmarish dream
Or is it really just my own reality
Where I am slowly losing my sanity
These words I type with sticky fingers
Where my drying blood now lingers
From tears torn from my fleshy shell
Broken glass from my fragmented hell
I dance to a tune written by death
And my steps will soon become less and less
I sing a song where I am lost
My life may be even worth the cost
To lay down and give up the fight
Sleep and fade away from everyone's sight.
Author notes
just being myself, feeling the aches and pains more so than ever, that i just kinda wonder if i should just give up the fight. though id be hunted down by friends here on aP if I did lol.
may have typo's or mis spelling, will correct later on.
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It's breath taking!! It tears at the soul....and binds you to it with every word...brillant way with words hun!!
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Brilliant as usual
You indeed would be hunted down if you gave up the fight!
This poem reaps the pain and suffering, but within it faint hope.
A future can be a lot brighter you know, just go out and you will find... as the door that closes, another one opens.
J x
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This is wonderfully dark and written with such despair. The flow is wonderful with smooth rhyme. I love the writing. Now on a more personal note, You are not allowed to give up, as with the others, I will hunt you down and kick your behind.
Hugs. 
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I will kick your but you betther never give up
I love you it will get better for all of us what would I do without you .All my love
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that right...I will hunt you down
Kindred I am sorry you feel so bad...but your writing is dark and deliscious always.
hugs Moony
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