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Failing Justice

Dawn is here and I will soon be out
My lies are gona free me from this concrete cell
Looking solemn to hide my laughing glee
I have raped and killed and now I am free!

I like them young I like them old
Im a bloody killer that no prison can hold
A child dies doing the usual paper run
Guess what it was me that killed your son!

Did you see the paper and old lady found
Wrapped in razor wire decapitated and bound
Yep that was me I enjoyed torturing her
Hit the world headlines really created a stir!

And now I walking out the prison gate
Hell yeah I can get in some kills before it gets late
Maybe the wardens daughter yummy and fresh
Catch her before school and rend her smooth flesh!

Just about free a few more steps to go
When out of nowhere a heavy blow
Hit by a speeding car instant death
Stealing my freedom and my breath.

Author notes

just angry at the justice syestem here in New Zealand, a child is killed the killer will prob get 15 years max, atm a killer is being released on bail and he's smiling, the justice syestem here is so screwed up.

may have typo's or mis spelling, will correct later on.

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  • LilJellyBean
    May 13, 2008
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    I really like this poem, its full of feeling and I enjoyed it


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 2, 2007

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    Wow

    What a way you portray this is amazing.
    Justice stinks what ever Country you are in, and its time to say Life means life!.
    J x


  • Dragons Lady
    October 2, 2007

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    Wow a very good write. Seems there is some anger expressed in the notes and who could blame you. It's so sad the justice system today. I like the end. Karma is a b*tch.


  • moon2u
    October 2, 2007
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    Well it seems you have administered your own justice...Karma!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 2, 2007

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    The justice sysytem ???? Is there such a thing anymore.This is a really good piece. I dont like the way that are society is turning it is not worth much these days thanks for sharing.Much love

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