When is the right time to say,
I love you to someone,
I feel so conflicted,
Don't know what to do,
Last time I said it,
It ended way before,
Any more could happen,
Do I wait longer?
See if she stays around,
Or tell her my hidden passion,
Is growing by each day that passes.
I don't want to say it to soon,
Or way to late,
But I know in the end,
It all leads to fate,
On whether or not,
She stays around.
She tells me it's all ok,
Let the words come out,
But I don't know if I'm ready yet,
I do feel I can love her,
But I don't think I should say,
What I truly feel yet,
Until I get to know her better.
When I do get the nerve to say it,
I know she'll say it back,
So honey be patient,
Which I know you will,
Until I finally say,
Those three words,
That have such an impact.
Author notes
I hope this is ok for the contest. It does have to do with love though I haven't yet to say I love you to her.
A contest entry
- I Found It! Have you? by Nicole Cudworth.
900 points, ended November 6, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Outstanding LP
Amazing how just like you said I am going through exactly teh same emotions you did. When is too soon, when is too late, how, where, so many thoughts along with fear of making the wrong decision. When I talked with my love she too told me to never hold back, to never be afraid to say what is in my heart, it shouldnt be held in..yet still I fear revealing it so much... This could have come from my heart right now with what I am facing at the present time..maybe I'll "borrow" this, it worked for you.....
Beautiful, and congrats....
Evan
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Thanks so much for the comment.
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I truly loved this! The conflict you face over telling her you love her or not is a hard choice to make... It's a turning point in a relationship and a very big step as those words should not be said lightly. I can see you understand that and are willing to make sure before opening up that particular door. I wish you the best of luck in finding the right time to tell her! Thank you for your entry.
Love and luck in all you endeavor
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hunny if you feel it than say it but i know what you mean and i am falling more and more in love w/ you everyday there is not a second that goes by that i do not think about you and theres not a night were you are not in my dreams i feel you next to me in my sleep i feel so close to you even though we are so far apart i love you dearly but i don't know where to start i can't explain the way you make me feel. there are no words to tell you how much i care for you. i wish i could ease your mind w/ a kiss upon your lips and w/ three simple words that mean so much. just no i will always be in your heart and you in mine i love you so dearly
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