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death trap

my love is my confession
i can not be a possession
you have been my one obsession
but is was not a good profession
it was a form of repression
leading to despair and regression
giving my love a bad impression
i want a soul merging compression
our lives to be an expression
my love is my confession

 





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totally inspired by Papa Roach's musical genius

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  • black hearted rebel
    November 26, 2007
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    wow

    This was really bood!I loved the way you wrote it!I enjoyed reading it!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 3, 2007

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    Papa Roach is so talented, and so are you. I really like this, I cannot rhyme like this at all. Great write.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Akarian silver member
    October 2, 2007

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    ::hug:: beautiful write! Depressing though... thats why I give you a hug! even though I hate rhyming, this rocks. =P


  • Innocent Evil
    October 2, 2007
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    Awsome you rhymed liek EVERY WORD!!! i wish i could do that.love it.


  • lee-sharp
    October 2, 2007
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    youre alive. and writing using the "-ession" sound of all things. hows life?


  • lemonhead
    October 2, 2007
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    WOw great job!! I loove the ryming! it's soo cool!


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    October 2, 2007

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    That really flows off the tongue! The end of line rhyming was wonderful and gave this write a nice rhythm. Been missing you!

    Love~
    Az

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