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Sculpting

Missing image

your breath

gently chisels

my song

 

poetry

makes love

to poetry

and moves on...

 

sculpted souvenirs

of fragrance and words

linger...

 

 

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  • Ladybug
    November 2, 2007
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    a grand whisper of Love here
    I love the way it lingers on...


    ::Tamara


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 7, 2007
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  • Heart Sutra
    October 7, 2007
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  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    October 5, 2007

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    Love written in our hearts and in poetry never dies. A lovely take on the contest theme. This one lingers in my eyes. Thank you for this entry.

    ~Lyrical


    • inder silver member
      October 5, 2007
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      encoragement and a dew decorated rose,a true early morning gift! thank you lyrical.

  • Tercarro
    October 5, 2007
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    Precisely

    This has it all, beauty and flow in one movement.
    Great, I love it.

    • inder silver member
      October 5, 2007
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      thank you so much for the graceful comment,I loved the way you have put it


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 5, 2007

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    This is lovely and a very creative take on the contest theme. "poetry makes love to poetry..." because of the love given by a lover's breath..but the memories live on in and through poetry... Lovely...almost like a canon song. We are indeed sculpted by those that touch us. Lovely brevity to this poem without losing impact. Thank you so much for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette


    • inder silver member
      October 5, 2007
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      just came with a whiff from no where and took me by surprise.The contest has brought out some fantastic things

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    October 2, 2007

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    Worded strings spun round a memory,
    a knot around each sense...

    the way they looked, they smelled, they felt
    I've felt each new day since...
    I've tasted fledging personalities,
    their love of life so sweet

    but hearing that "I love you mommy"
    makes each poem, page and moment so complete!

    A terrific poem and a glimpse into you I like these kinds of contest because everyone is differnt and in the light of crativity, people show those underworkings that make them unique in thought, everyone sees something different, it just depends on how deep they are looking

    Sending s and all the best wishes to you...

    ~Genie~


    • inder silver member
      October 2, 2007
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      I adore Nicolette's contests,they have a sense of depth and prompting that brings out new perspectives.I am enjoying the poems you string in your comments,they are so spontaneous.

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