Beyond the fantasy
playful truth waits
in the corners of light.
Dancing fingertips
find solitude
in thoughts of you;
licking my dreams
with the desire
of reaching an open space,
somewhere in the distance...
I press against night
waiting for your sign
just to see expressions
fall inside my smile.
My heart lingers
searching for quiet footsteps
moving towards my world.
Far away
but close enough to feel.
A contest entry
- Truth. by Kelsey-Jo.
1700 points, ended October 17, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
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I was gonna say 'licking my dreams' was my favourite line, but then I read loads more favourite lines, very very good
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Mmm... your imagery is delicious, my friend. I'm impressed and definitely enjoyed your style.
Kelsey-Jo -
amazing(again)! you never stop, don't you?!
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Pino Art!! Anticipation... wonderful!!
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mmmm the inner most thoughts interesting and provoking
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