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One Persons Lesson (My daddy)

I once dance to a song

with my drunkin daddy

even though he was drunk

 he sang me a song

"Just The Way You Are"

I will never forget that night

for as i long as i live

because even drunk he told me ,

something that no man has yet to say

 

To be myself and he wanted me just the way i was!

He did'nt want me to change

(although i did with every man ,but him)

He tryed to teach me something

by singing me that song

i should have listened intently .

 

Now at forty one

I understand why

Love pure love knows who you are

and would love who you are.

 

 

 

(The words to the song)

By Billy Joel

"Just The Way You Are"

Just the Way You Are

 

 

Don't go changing, to try and please me

You never let me down before

I don't imagine you're too familiar

And I don't see you anymore

I wouldn't leave you in times of trouble

We never could have come this far

I took the good times, I'll take the bad times

I'll take you just the way you are

 

Don't go trying some new fashion

Don't change the color of your hair

You always have my unspoken passion

Although I might not seem to care

 

I don't want clever conversation

I never want to work that hard

I just want someone that I can talk to

I want you just the way you are.

 

 

 

I need to know that you will always be

The same old someone that I knew

What will it take till you believe in me

The way that I believe in you.

 

 

I said I love you and that's forever

And this I promise from the heart

I could not love you any better

I love you just the way you are.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • loveyourfate
    December 16, 2007
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    Thanks for your entry. A wonderful poem you've written, feelings do come bursting through!


  • CrazyKelsea
    October 3, 2007

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    Emotional.

    Lisa,
    This is great. I love it. Expressibly because it's about your Dad. This is truly amazing, beautifully lovely, emotions run wild, and unqunic. I loved it. I like that song, actually. This is great, I admire your writings so much. I love you MOM!!!

  • Liquid memories
    October 2, 2007
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    very nice with feelings. thanks for sharing.


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    October 2, 2007

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    awwwwwww

    Bravo Bravo, this brough tears to my eyes my friend. The picture of you with your daddy and the sweet thing he said to you. You are right..... if you had only listened to him. He was so wise and loving to tell you that. Lisa you are a beautiful and precious creation of God and he made you who you are and how you are. No other person has the right to question what God made you to be. Including yourself! God knew what he was doing. God bless you my friend, Mark


  • singingfreedom
    October 2, 2007
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    This was sweet, beautiful, and profound. I enjoyed reading it very much.

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